Saturday, March 07, 2009

ਅਸਮਾਨਾਂ ਦੀ ਸੁਰਤਿ ਪਿਆਰੀ...


Prabhsharandeep Singh said...

Have tried this one, how does it sound?

The beloved soul
of the heavens
touching the buds
quivers in waters
the sky
of my heart
is deep
will make
this appealing one

Anonymous said...

Its beautiful. I like the sound of the original seems very deep. Just imagine how much beauty behind punjabi poetry has been lost overtime and not been exposed to the world because of language barriers :(

Anonymous said...

Yeah, same with Sikhi. Silly Hegel.

Prabhsharandeep Singh said...

bak rahaa hooN junooN meiN kya kya kuchch
kuchch na samjhe KHuda kare koee

[I am blabbering away nonsense, in my state of ecstasy
I pray to God that nobody understands what I am saying]


Yeah! You do not sound Hegelian, but Ghalibian, as I did not understand what you are trying to say.

Anonymous said...

Hello second anonymous, why feel the need to resort to relating it to Hegel etc.... take comments at face value at times and allow yourself to experience the poetry